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文题是作者给读者发出的“请帖”。若是文题无吸引读者的信息,概略写得不随意纰漏年夜白,就会失?读者。是以,要写好一个内容正确、清晰、文字凝炼且吸惹人的英文问题并不是一件随意纰漏的事,作者需要有必然的英语文字手法和把握必然的写作方式,若是要写出相符西方读者的胃口的文题,甚至对西方文化得有研究才行。医学论文问题翻译的根底要求是:正确、清晰、简练和活跃。清晰,恍惚不清的文题经常会给读者和做索引的人带来麻烦和未便。如下面一个文题The Effects of Vioform on Its Onset中央的不定代词全数格“Its”很费解。
有些作者在文题中喜欢用非英语词汇(包含拉丁语,当然个体有破例)。有些医学术语是以地名和人名来命名的,但不常用,是以在文题中行使仿佛欠妥。例如:Cotunnius’disease是指坐骨神经痛(sciatica),有谁知道呢?生怕很少读者在阅读医学杂志目录时频频查辞书的吧!
读者只求迅速获得常识,所以文题要写得具体清晰,如A Complication of Translumbar Aortography中央complication是什么呢?改成Aortic Dissection after Translumbar Aortography就晓畅多了。
简练:一个文题能用一行文字表达,最好不要用两行。超出两行则会削弱读者的印象。最好的设施是用数个字透露表现文章的中央内容,作主题目,再加一个副题目注解区别。
The Effect of Diet on Stotistical Rish in Patients with Coronary Artery Disease.可写成:Coronary Artery Disease: Diet and Statistical Risk.
在文题中,作者应该将首要位置留给关键词。
A Double-Blind Trial of Low Doses of Subcutaneous Heparin in the Prevention of Deep Vein Thrombosis after Myocardial Infarction:Prevention by Heparin.
文题中经常可以删去不需要的冠词(a,an和the)和多余的声名性短语:studies of;observation on;investigation of;evaluation of ;experimental report of;development of;use of ;treatment of …
作者还要注重文题中词意上的重叠,如Tuaumatic Injuries of the Inferior Vena Cava;Surgical Postoperative Bleeding Associated with Aspirin Ingestion;Sterilization with IUD Contraception.
润色词位置欠妥
下面是润色词位置欠妥的例子:Toxoplasmosis in Humans Derived from Cats正确的写法是:Toxoplasmosis Derived from Cats in Humans
又如:Cars Blamed for Pollution by Scientist正确的写法是:Cars Blamed by Scientist for Pollution
名词堆砌
Factors Influencing Primary Liver Cancer Resection Survival Rate对照好的写法是:Factors Influencing Survival Rate After Resection of Primary Liver Cancer
又如:Severe Respiratory Tract Erosive Burns 可改为:Severe Erosive Burns of the Respiratory Tract
冗繁A 29-year-old Man with Miliary Pulmonary Patten on Radiologic Examination其实取后半部门文字文字作文题就够了:Miliary Pulmonary Patten on Radiologic Examination
西方作者偏向于行使一个简短的句子作为题目问题,句子多为省略句、简短的陈述句,也可以用疑问句,显得活跃而吸惹人。国内作者在写文题时可以考试考试模拟西方作者的这种做法。
例如:
Long-Term Digitalis Therapy Improves left Ventricular Function in Heart Failure
不合逻辑
Prevention of Sudden Death……
介词行使欠妥
误:Clinical Research of Dibutytryl Cyclic AMP in Psoriasis
正:Clinical Research on Dibutytryl Cyclic AMP in Psoriasis
误:Insulinoma:Diagnostic and Therapeutic Experience with 60 Cases
正:Insulinoma:Diagnostic and Therapeutic Experience in 60 Cases
误:Anesthetic Manangement of carotid Surgery
正:Anesthetic Manangement for carotid Surgery
误:Surgery in Congenital Choledochus Cyst
正:Surgery for Congenital Choledochus Cyst
滥用缩略语
有些异常用缩略语若是不写出全名经常会使读者不知所措。其余,医学中统一个略语可以有多种注释,如Cv可以注释为cardiovascular、costovertebral等。所以,文题要避免缩略语,其目的显而易见。